The Walking Bear And A Hand Full of Bees_UPDATED

Cool stuff! Interested to see where you will go next 

As you asked for feedback: personally i would lower the kick a bit more, and try to get it 'a bit' in tune. I don't think a kick should be tuned perfectly personally, but I like searching for a bit of a sweet spot in the low end. But keeping the punch while going low can require some tinkering. But I think its rather important in techno!

I think some extra percussive elements could also be cool (something hihatt-y). But thats just me, i love percs.

Of course, have fun yourself and take this all as a very personal opinion!